在雅思小作文考試中,經(jīng)常會(huì)給出大家一個(gè)或多個(gè)圖表,要求大家描述其中所展示出來的信息。在餅圖類圖表中經(jīng)常會(huì)要求各位考生去描述所占的比例,那么涉及到這類的考題,我們需要積累哪些素材呢?接下來小編為大家總結(jié)了一些答題素材,我們來看看如何來描述數(shù)據(jù)比例。

 在雅思寫作小作文書寫過程中,比例是大概率會(huì)出現(xiàn)的描述對(duì)象,很多同學(xué)都很有可能會(huì)寫下如下錯(cuò)句:

 1. The percentage of electricity produced by coal accounted for 40% in 1980.

 2. The proportion of electricity produced by coal constituted 40% in 1980.

 如果有還看不出來上述句子中錯(cuò)誤的同學(xué),亦或是對(duì)于比例句型的同義替換還束手無策的同學(xué),快跟著小航繼續(xù)往下看哦,蔣老師特別為大家精心整理了一些劍橋真題中的例句,并且詳細(xì)分了類!

 01

 基礎(chǔ)句型或括號(hào)解釋

 基礎(chǔ)句型:the proportion 是多少。

 1. Couples generally tended to be better, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). C4T1

 夫妻一般傾向于呈現(xiàn)更好的家庭水平,與沒有孩子的夫婦相比(12%),沒有孩子的夫婦(7%)的貧困水平更低。

 2. By contrast, more women held undergraduate diplomas(70%) and marginally more women reached degree level(55%). C4T3

 相比之下,更多的女性持有本科文憑(70%),也有較多女性達(dá)到了學(xué)位水平(55%)。

 3. In 1940 the proportion of people aged 65 or more stood at only 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and 9% in the US. C5T1

 1940,日本65歲以上人口的比例僅為5%,瑞典為7%,美國為9%。

 以上句型難度系數(shù)最低,適用于比例句型出錯(cuò)率較高的同學(xué),對(duì)于寫作目標(biāo)分5.5-6分的同學(xué)而言,以上句型為必須掌握句型。

 02

 解釋+數(shù)據(jù)

 解釋+數(shù)據(jù):*% of 總量 do something.

 1. On average, 11% of all households, comprising(非謂語動(dòng)詞) almost two million people, were in this position. C4T1

 平均而言,11%的家庭,包括近二百萬人,在這個(gè)水平。

 2. In contrast, older people were generally less likely to be poor,only 4% for aged couple, and 6% for single aged person respectively. C4T1

 相比之下,老年人一般不太可能貧窮,分別只有4%的老年夫婦,和6%的單身老人(是貧窮的)。

 3. By 2000, coal had become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced and only hydro continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20%. C7T4

 至2000年之前,煤炭已成為電力生產(chǎn)力超過75%的燃料,只有水力發(fā)電仍然是供應(yīng)約20%的另一重要能源。

 4. But by 2000 nuclear power, which was not used at all in Australia, had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units, while coal and oil together produced only 50 units. C7T4

 但到2000年,澳大利亞完全不使用的核能已經(jīng)發(fā)展成為(法國的)主要能源,生產(chǎn)將近75%的電力,有126個(gè)units,而煤和石油總共只生產(chǎn)50個(gè)units。

 5. Globally, 65% of degradation is caused by too much animal grazing and tree clearance, constituting 35% and 30% respectively. A further 28% of global degradation in due to over-cultivation of crops. C8T1

 全球65%的退化是由于動(dòng)物放牧和樹木清除過多造成的,分別占35%和30%。由于過度耕作而導(dǎo)致了全球更進(jìn)一步28%的退化。

 6. These causes affected different regions differently in the 1990s, with Europe having as much as 9.8% of degradation due to deforestation, … C8T1

 這些原因在20世紀(jì)90年代影響了不同的地區(qū),歐洲因砍伐森林而造成的退化率高達(dá)9.8%。

 7. The biggest gender difference is at the lowest post-school level, where 90% of those who held a skilled vocational diploma were men, compared with only 10% of women. C4T3

 最大的性別差異是在畢業(yè)后最低學(xué)業(yè)水平,持有熟練職業(yè)文憑的人中有90%是男性,而女性只有10%。

 應(yīng)用:

 Around 9% of population in the USA were aged 65 and over, compared with only 7% and 5% in Sweden and Japan respectively. (C5T1)

 以上句型難度系數(shù)較低,但是靈活度較高,對(duì)于寫作目標(biāo)分6-6.5分的同學(xué)而言,以上句型為必須掌握句型。

 03

 動(dòng)態(tài)圖中比例增加或減少的體現(xiàn)

 1. It indicates that the percentage of elderly people in all three countries is expected to increase to almost 25% of the respective populations by the year 2040. C5T1

 報(bào)告指出,預(yù)計(jì)到2040年,這三個(gè)國家的老年人口比例將增加到各自人口的將近25%。

 2. However, while the figures for the Western countries grew to about 15% in around 1990, the figure for Japan dipped to only 2.5% for much of this period, before rising to almost 5% again at the present time. C5T1

 然而,當(dāng)西方國家的數(shù)字在1990年左右增長到大約15%時(shí),日本的數(shù)字在這個(gè)時(shí)期的大部分時(shí)間里只下降到2.5%,直到現(xiàn)在再次上升到幾乎5%。

 以上句型難度系數(shù)較低,完全基于動(dòng)態(tài)句型,對(duì)于寫作目標(biāo)分5.5分以上的同學(xué)而言,以上句型為必須掌握句型。不會(huì)的同學(xué),得先想想,是不是動(dòng)態(tài)句型也沒有很好地掌握呢?

 04

 With+非謂語動(dòng)詞

 1.However, those consisting of one parent or a single adult had almost doubled this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively. C4T1

 然而,由單親或單身成年人組成的貧困人口比例幾乎翻了一番,分別為21%和19%。

 2. …while the impact of this on Oceania and North America was minimal, with only 1.7% and 0.2% of land affected respectively. C8T1

 ...雖然這對(duì)大洋洲和北美洲的影響是微乎其微的,只有1.7%和0.2%的土地分別受到影響。

 以上句型具有一定難度,對(duì)于寫作目標(biāo)分6分以上的同學(xué)而言,以上句型為必須掌握句型?！静粫?huì)使用非謂語動(dòng)詞的同學(xué)可學(xué)習(xí)《胡敏雅思教材第7代雅思核心語法基礎(chǔ)版》中pp78-81的內(nèi)容,了解關(guān)系從句與非謂語動(dòng)詞作后置定語的用法】

 05

 占比例詞組的正確打開方式

 占比例詞組:Constitute, account for, make up, represents.

 1. At the higher levels of education, men with postgraduate diplomas clearly outnumbered their female counterpart (70% and 30%, respectively), and also constituted 60% of Master’s graduates. C4T3

 在高等教育水平,擁有研究生文憑的男性明顯多于女性(分別為70%和30%),也占碩士研究生的60%。

 2. Globally, 65% of degradation is caused by too much animal grazing and tree clearance, constituting 35% and 30% respectively. C8T1

 在全球范圍內(nèi),65%的退化是由于動(dòng)物放牧和樹木清除過多造成的,分別占(退化總量的)35%和30%。

 3. A German text occupies about 30% more space than its English translation.

 德語文本比英語翻譯多占據(jù)了30%的篇幅?！緊ccupy強(qiáng)調(diào)的是時(shí)間和空間的占用,所以使用的時(shí)候請(qǐng)小心哦】

 4. Oxygen makes up roughly 20% of the atmosphere.

 氧氣占大氣的20%左右。

 5. Chinese business represents 73% of the Indonesian corporate sector.

 中國企業(yè)占印尼企業(yè)總數(shù)的73%。

 以上句型具有一定難度,對(duì)于寫作目標(biāo)分6分以上的同學(xué)而言,以上句型為必須掌握句型。

 講到現(xiàn)在,不知道同學(xué)們能否修改放在文章前端的兩個(gè)錯(cuò)句呢?以下是表達(dá)這個(gè)意思的正確打開方式,快來檢測一下你有沒有學(xué)會(huì)正確去表達(dá)比例!

 1. The percentage of electricity produced by coal was 40% in 1980.

 2. Electricity produced by coal constituted 40% of total electricity produced in 1980.

 3. 40% of electricity was produced by coal in 1980.

 以上是小編為大家?guī)淼摹把潘夹∽魑闹性趺疵枋鰯?shù)據(jù)所占比例”相關(guān)內(nèi)容,希望對(duì)大家備考雅思寫作有一定的幫助,結(jié)合有效的練習(xí)和日常的積累能順利在雅思寫作考試中拿到一個(gè)滿意的成績。

  廣州雅思英語學(xué)校成立于1999年,現(xiàn)任校長是有中國雅思“教父”之稱的中國社會(huì)科學(xué)院博士、中國雅思教育開拓者,資深留學(xué)教育專家萬昌明博士。廣州雅思英語學(xué)校是國內(nèi)最早的專業(yè)雅思學(xué)校之一,也是英語IELTS考試中文“雅思”命名的首創(chuàng)者之一。十九年來, 廣州雅思英語學(xué)校秉承“教育以學(xué)生為本,以質(zhì)量為先”辦學(xué)宗旨,堅(jiān)持“知識(shí)、激情、勵(lì)志”的教學(xué)理念,發(fā)展成為華南乃至中國最大的雅思學(xué)校之一。